Monday, December 31, 2007

My favorite season Draft-1

Because the summer is an animated season, I love summer.
To begin with, the happiness is belonged to summer. Many children play on the ground, they have lot of vigor. But their laughing and joking which symbolizes youthful vigor and cheerful. I consider that summer is a playing summer.

Secondly, the plentiful taste bud filled our mouths in summer. The summer fruits conclude watermelon, banana, mango, and so on. In summer, we can enjoy value fruits which in a hot day. Just like yummy fruits jump in my mouth.


The butterflies and bees are dancing in the park. They are working. They work hard to save their food. Besides, the flowers are in full bloom in everywhere. The flowers are so beautiful that I can’t control myself to admire this scenery.

I very feast my feeling on summer. Summer is my season.

The unforgettable experience I've ever had Draft-2

When I studied in the kindergarten, I had a sever accident that I can’t forgettable.
On the way to home, my grandfather took me by a scooter. When we passed though the crossroads, suddenly, the other scooter bumped us, my grandfather and I fell down from the scooter on the road.
At the first, I saw the blue sky in front of my eyes. Second, I looked at my grandfather; he lay on the other side of the road. He can’t move but he can’t talk. He asked me that if I got hurt or not.
At that time, I cried. Not only had my grandfather far away from me, but also many struggled of books. I really took fright. Very soon, the ambulance came. Fortunately, my grandfather and I were got little abrasion, we were safety. This is the unforgettable experience I’ve ever had.

The unforgettable experience I've ever had Draft-1

When I was a kindergarten student, I had a sever accident that I can’t forgettable.
On the way to home, my grandfather took me by a scooter. When we passed though the crossroads, suddenly, the other scooter bumped us, my grandfather and I fell down from the scooter on the road.
First, I saw the blue sky in front of my eyes. Second, I looked at my grandfather; he was on the other side of the road. He can’t move but he can’t talk. He asked me that if I got hurt or not.
At that time, I cried. Not only had my grandfather far away from me, but also many struggled of books. I really took fright. Soon, the ambulance came. Fortunately, my grandfather and I were got little abrasion, we were safety. This is the unforgettable experience I’ve ever had.

Tuesday, October 02, 2007

Helping people makes me happy Drft-2

Helping people makes me happy Drft-2
I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday morning, an old woman was kneeling and crying on the hospital aisle at midnight. I neared her slowly; she did not stop crying and told me she was looking for her sick husband and that she wanted to see him. I helped her to find her husband one floor and others. At last, when I wanted to give up, it was totally sun rising. It just likes a beginning. I made up my mind to look for him. Finally, I find him in an intensive care unit. After she saw him, she disappeared quickly. At the same time, her husband woke up in a miracle. He told me his lovely wife had died in an accident. He burst out crying and shaking my hands to say thanks to me.
To help people can make me feel satisfied and it is just like you get a glass of water in the desert. Helping people makes me joyful.

Saturday, September 22, 2007

Helping people makes me happy Drft-1

I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday morning, an old woman was kneeling and crying on the hospital aisle in the midnight. I neared her slowly; she did not stop crying and told me she was looking for her sick husband and that she wanted to see him. I hoped her to find her husband one floor and others. At last, when I wanted to give up, it was totally sun rising. It just likes a beginning. I made up my mind to look for him. Finally, I find him in an intensive care unit. After she saw him, she disappeared quickly. At the same time, her husband woke up in a miraculous. He told me his lovely wife had died in an accident. He burst our crying and shaking my hands to say thanks to me.

To help people can make me feel satisfied and it is just kike you get a glass of water in the desert. Helping people makes me joyful.

Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Autobiography Draft-2

In 1990, a baby girl was born. Who is she? It’s me. I was born in Tainan County. My name is Yi-jin Wang. There’re five members in my family. My grandmother is 90 years old, but she still let other people feel that she is very healthy. My father is working in Taichung; he is so busy that I don’t meet him until yesterday. My mother is a cashier of the 台糖, it has to be careful. My younger brother studies six-grades in the elementary school.

On the holidays, I like to listen to music and go to the library to read the new books. Sometime I can stay at the library all the day. I like to read the books about natural. Even I will find the fashionable objects on the books. It’s very interesting. I also love to play basketball with my brother. We always have a good time when we super sweat.

Wednesday, June 06, 2007

Making Decisions Draft-1

Growing up means making my own decisions. It is too old enough to make whatever decisions. No anymore the girl, being unsophisticated. I can do stand alone by myself, and I’m dependent on my parents or friends is unnecessarily. Consequently, I must make decisions by my own.

The hardest decision that I ever made was applying for Tainan’s senior high school. Since the school is far away from my hometown, I still go to the school for accomplishing my goal. If I go to the far-off school, I have to wake up very early, and take the morning train to school. When I go home, it is very late and tired. Nevertheless, I go to the school, my English ability becomes very well. Although, I spend lots of time to make this decision, I will trust my decision. I’m old senior to before.

Computers Draft-2

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They are also the most influential invention of the twentieth century. Students can use the computer to write accounts, make friends or obtain knowledge via the network system. For the business, it’s convenient to deal with the factories and stores of a foreign country. Because the advantage of computers, we can do anything with automation. Besides, they have been comprehensively used in the government and private organization.

Personally, I have a liking for computer. It takes only a few hours how to learn to use the computers. When I have to exercise it to do my homework, it’s very practical. In addition, finding the information with less time makes me do the study more businesslike. In the free time, I like to dismiss the time with the computer. I am fond of reading the articles on the internet. With the computer, I prefer using it makes my temperament of the literature great strides.

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Computers Draft-1

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They also are the most influential invention of the twentieth century. Students can use the computer to write an account, make friends or obtain knowledge via the network system. For the business, it’s convenient to deal with the factories and stores of a foreign country. Because the advantageous computers, we can do anything with automation. Besides, it has been comprehensively used in the government and private organization.

Personally, I have a liking for computer. It takes only a few hours to learn to use the computers. When I have to exercise it to do my homework, it’s very practical. In addition, finding the information with less time makes me do the study more businesslike. In the free time, I like to dismiss the time with the computer. I am fond of reading the articles on the internet. With the computer, I prefer using it makes my temperament of the literature great strides.

Thursday, May 03, 2007

Autobiography 3.4 Draft-2

After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High School, I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. It is the first time that I have a class for a foreign teacher. I feel excited and newfangled. Till now, I get a lot of English skills from the foreign teacher. Besides, I am a history teacher’s assistant. Even though, it is busy;I am aware that is very substantial. Our class got third place of the school songs and English singing. I think our classmates are the best in the school. In the future, I want to study in a good university.In addition, I will strengthen my language abilities. And I hope I can travel some places where I want to go.I want to make my life colorful.

Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Autobiography 3.4 Draft-1

After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High School, I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. It is first time that has a class for a foreign teacher. I feel excited and newfangled. Till now, I get a lot of English skills from the foreign teacher. Besides, I am a history teacher’s assistant. Even though it is busy, I am aware that is very substantial. Our class got third price of the school songs and English singing. I think our classmates are the best in the school.
In the future, I want to study in a good university. Besides, I will let my language ability better and better. And I hope I can travel some places where I want to go.
I want to make my life colorful.

Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Autobiography Draft-1

In 1190, a baby girl was born. Who is she? It’s me. I was born in Tainan County. My name is Yi-jin Wang. There’re five members in my family. My grandmother is 90 years old, but she still let other people feel that she is very healthy. My father is working in Taichung; he is so busy that I don’t meet him until yesterday. My mother is a cashier of the 台糖, it has to be careful. My younger brother studies six-grades in the elementary school.

On the holidays, I like to listen to music and go to the library read the new books. Sometimes, I can stay at the library all day. I like to read books about natural. Even I will find the fashionable objects on the books. It’s very interesting. I also love to play basketball with my brother. We always have a good time when we super sweat.

Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Translation Draft-2

1.Programs Draft-2 Choosing the TV programs carefully is very important. Although TV programs offer the important channels which have information and entertainment.It may have some disadvantages. Some programs filled with violence and lust which has bed influences. Spending too much time watching TV will hurt our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose some programs that it's good for our bodies and mind. The most important thing is that don’t be couch potatoes.
2.Computer Draft-2 In our life, the computers play an important role; it can help students’ works hand in quickly, it also help people deliver the information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you must fall in love with them. However, it should be sure to remind yourselves: Don’t sit in front of the computers for a long time, generality parents don’t like their children to be dependent on the computers, especially the bulletin boards, it is wasting our time.

Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Translation Draft-1

1.Programs Draft-1
Choosing the TV programs carefully is very important. Although TV programs offer the important channels which have information and entertainment.
It may be some disadvantages. Some programs filled with violence and lust which has bed influences. Spending too much time watching TV, it’ll hurt our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose some programs that it’ll good for our bodies and mind. The most important thing is that don’t be couch potatoes.
2.Computer Draft-1
In our life, the computers play an important role; it can help students’ works hand in quickly, it also help people deliver the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with them. However, it should be sure to remind yourselves: Don’t sit in front of the computers for a long time, generality parents don’t like their children to be dependent on the computers, especially the bulletin boards, it is wasting our time.

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Weeping for joy Draft-2

Tom and Lisa are brother and sister. Several weeks ago, their mother got sick and was sent to the hospital. They found a tumor in their mother's guts. Tom and Lisa were very nervous and afeard about that.Because of their mother, they can not sleep or eat very well.
Their mother was checking and checking. They were waiting for a report. After inspecting, they found the guts were a benign tumor. The surgeons operated on her to remove the tumor. Lisa was in the hospital after her mother was operating. Now it is a very successful operate. Lisa calls her brother and tells him this good news. Eventually, they are weeping for joy.

Weeping for joy Draft-1

Tom and Lisa are brother and sister. Several weeks ago, their mother got sick and sent to the hospital. They found a tumor in their mother’s guts. Tom and Lisa were very nervous and afeard about that. They can not sleep or eat very well, because of their mother.
Their mother was checking and checking. They were waiting for a report. After inspecting, they found the guts were a benign tumor. The surgeon operated on her to remove the tumor. Lisa was in the hospital after her mother operating. Now it is a very successful operate. Lisa calls her brother and tells him this good news. Eventually, they are weeping for joy.

Wednesday, March 07, 2007

Ways to do well in school Draft-2

It's important for us to do well in school, because our parents view our grades and we have to use this knowledge to enter a good university.First of all, we should read many great books to increase our information therefore we can enrich our opinion.Next, while teachers focusing on the books, we not only study hard, but also listen carefully.In the long run, preview and review the school books.It can let our memory be clear about the teacher's teach.Practice makes perfect. After studying in school, we must try our best to do our own school works.

Thursday, February 22, 2007

Ways to do well in school Draft-1

It's important for us to do well in school, because our parents view our grades and we have to use this knowledge to look for a good university.
First of all, we should read a great many books to input our information therefore we can enrich our opinion.
Next, while teacher focusing on the books, we not onlystudying hard, but also listening carefully.
In the long run, preview and review the school books.It can let our memory be clear about the teacher's teach.
Practice makes perfect. After studying in school, we must try our best do our own school works.

Thursday, January 18, 2007

Pollution draft-2

There are more and more air, water and noise pollution in our cities today.. This pollution is made by our life. The main culprits are city buses, motorcycles and factories.Air pollution causes greenhouse effect; there is too much CO2 to make the temperature on the earth gets higher and higher. Therefore, we reduce a lot of water.Water pollution is the most serious pollution. Without water, we can't alive. But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste it. Some people think we have lots of water, they make dirty into the water, as a result, and we don't have clean water.Noise pollution, the cars and factories bring noise. Sometimes, we have diseases because of noise. Noise makes people moody or crazy. We can't own a place where is peaceful.Finally, we make many pollutions; there is only one earth. We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in.

My bedroom- draft 2

I love my bedroom, because it filled with my memories.When you walk into my bedroom, there is a big rug in the middle of the room. The dresser is on the right and next to the bed.The window is on the back wall, it always has sunshine.And there is a cute clock over the window. The green cabinet is on the left. The desk is on the left corner , on the desk, it usually has a large of things on it. The computer is next to the desk.I like my bedroom because of there is a lot of things about me.

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Pollution draft-1

There is much air, water and noise pollution in our cities today. This pollution is made by our life. The main culprits are city buses, motorcycles and factories.
Air pollution causes greenhouse effect; there is too much CO2 to make the temperature on the earth gets higher and higher. There, we reduce a lot of water.
Water pollution is the most serious pollution. Without water, we can't alive. But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste. Some people think we have lots of water, they make dirty into the water, as a result, and we don't have clean water.
Noise pollution, the cars and factories bring noise. Sometimes, we have diseases because of noise. Noise makes people moody or crazy. We can't own a place where is peace.Finally, we make any pollution; there is only one earth. We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in.

Monday, January 08, 2007

An Embarrassing Experience Draft-2

There was a very embarrassing experience in my childhood. One day, I went to the park with my parents. I played a ball alone, at the same time my parents sat on a chair and looked at me. I played so happy that I didn't see my parents. I felt scared so I cried. And I started looking for them. I saw a man who was familiar to my dad. I ran to him, gave him a hug and called him dad. The man perceived strange but he didn't say anything, I just still cried and cried. My parents saw the situation which was so funny and same here to say sorry to the man.“ It's okay.”the man smiled. I hid behind my father. Finally, we went home with happiness. To look a stranger as my father, that's an embarrassing experience for me.

Wednesday, January 03, 2007

My bedroom-Draft 1

I love my bedroom, because it is filled with my memories.
When you walk into my bedroom, there is a big rug in the middle of the room. The dresser is on the right and next to the bed.
The window is on the back wall, it always has sunshine.
And there is a cute clock over the window. The green cabinet is on the left. The desk is in the left corner, on the desk, it usually has a large of things on it. The computer is next to the desk.
I like my bedroom, because of there is a lot of things about me.