There is much air, water and noise pollution in our cities today. This pollution is made by our life. The main culprits are city buses, motorcycles and factories.
Air pollution causes greenhouse effect; there is too much CO2 to make the temperature on the earth gets higher and higher. There, we reduce a lot of water.
Water pollution is the most serious pollution. Without water, we can't alive. But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste. Some people think we have lots of water, they make dirty into the water, as a result, and we don't have clean water.
Noise pollution, the cars and factories bring noise. Sometimes, we have diseases because of noise. Noise makes people moody or crazy. We can't own a place where is peace.Finally, we make any pollution; there is only one earth. We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in.
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"But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste."
I think writing "waste it" is better.
a place where is "peace"
maybe you should chang into
"peaceful"
"There",we reduce a lot of water.
I think change into "Therefore"
"There is much air, water and noise pollution in our cities today." can change into " There are more and more air, water and noise pollution in our cities today."
*we make any pollution* should change to many pollrtions.
"We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in." Between "cites" and "convenient" should add "have".
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