Pollution draft-2

There are more and more air, water and noise pollution in our cities today.. This pollution is made by our life. The main culprits are city buses, motorcycles and factories.Air pollution causes greenhouse effect; there is too much CO2 to make the temperature on the earth gets higher and higher. Therefore, we reduce a lot of water.Water pollution is the most serious pollution. Without water, we can't alive. But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste it. Some people think we have lots of water, they make dirty into the water, as a result, and we don't have clean water.Noise pollution, the cars and factories bring noise. Sometimes, we have diseases because of noise. Noise makes people moody or crazy. We can't own a place where is peaceful.Finally, we make many pollutions; there is only one earth. We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in.

My bedroom- draft 2

I love my bedroom, because it filled with my memories.When you walk into my bedroom, there is a big rug in the middle of the room. The dresser is on the right and next to the bed.The window is on the back wall, it always has sunshine.And there is a cute clock over the window. The green cabinet is on the left. The desk is on the left corner , on the desk, it usually has a large of things on it. The computer is next to the desk.I like my bedroom because of there is a lot of things about me.

Pollution draft-1

There is much air, water and noise pollution in our cities today. This pollution is made by our life. The main culprits are city buses, motorcycles and factories.
Air pollution causes greenhouse effect; there is too much CO2 to make the temperature on the earth gets higher and higher. There, we reduce a lot of water.
Water pollution is the most serious pollution. Without water, we can't alive. But, in this industrialized country people are usually waste. Some people think we have lots of water, they make dirty into the water, as a result, and we don't have clean water.
Noise pollution, the cars and factories bring noise. Sometimes, we have diseases because of noise. Noise makes people moody or crazy. We can't own a place where is peace.Finally, we make any pollution; there is only one earth. We have to try to stop other people from causing pollution and make our cities convenient places to live in.

An Embarrassing Experience Draft-2

There was a very embarrassing experience in my childhood. One day, I went to the park with my parents. I played a ball alone, at the same time my parents sat on a chair and looked at me. I played so happy that I didn't see my parents. I felt scared so I cried. And I started looking for them. I saw a man who was familiar to my dad. I ran to him, gave him a hug and called him dad. The man perceived strange but he didn't say anything, I just still cried and cried. My parents saw the situation which was so funny and same here to say sorry to the man.“ It's okay.”the man smiled. I hid behind my father. Finally, we went home with happiness. To look a stranger as my father, that's an embarrassing experience for me.

My bedroom-Draft 1

I love my bedroom, because it is filled with my memories.
When you walk into my bedroom, there is a big rug in the middle of the room. The dresser is on the right and next to the bed.
The window is on the back wall, it always has sunshine.
And there is a cute clock over the window. The green cabinet is on the left. The desk is in the left corner, on the desk, it usually has a large of things on it. The computer is next to the desk.
I like my bedroom, because of there is a lot of things about me.