After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High School, I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. It is first time that has a class for a foreign teacher. I feel excited and newfangled. Till now, I get a lot of English skills from the foreign teacher. Besides, I am a history teacher’s assistant. Even though it is busy, I am aware that is very substantial. Our class got third price of the school songs and English singing. I think our classmates are the best in the school.
In the future, I want to study in a good university. Besides, I will let my language ability better and better. And I hope I can travel some places where I want to go.
I want to make my life colorful.
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Behind the "Even though" should add a ",".
"It is first time that has a class for a foreign teacher." change to " It is the first time that I have a class for a foreign teacher."
"I will let my language ability better and better." change to "I will let my language abilities beter and beter."
最好不要用兩個一樣的連接詞，Besides可以用In addition代替
"I will let my language ability better and better." I think "I will strengthen my foreigh language abilities." is better.
*It is first time that has a class for a foreign teacher.* should change to *It is first time that I has a class for a foreign teacher.*
"third price"
should change into
"third place"
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