Wednesday, June 06, 2007

Making Decisions Draft-1

Growing up means making my own decisions. It is too old enough to make whatever decisions. No anymore the girl, being unsophisticated. I can do stand alone by myself, and I’m dependent on my parents or friends is unnecessarily. Consequently, I must make decisions by my own.

The hardest decision that I ever made was applying for Tainan’s senior high school. Since the school is far away from my hometown, I still go to the school for accomplishing my goal. If I go to the far-off school, I have to wake up very early, and take the morning train to school. When I go home, it is very late and tired. Nevertheless, I go to the school, my English ability becomes very well. Although, I spend lots of time to make this decision, I will trust my decision. I’m old senior to before.

2 comments:

Jenny said...

"The hardest decision that I ever made was applying for Tainan’s senior high school." change into "The hardest decision that I ever made was applying for senior high school in Tainan." is better.

Fanny said...

"I spend lots of time to make this decision"
maybe you can change into
"I spend lots of time making this decision"