In 1190, a baby girl was born. Who is she? It’s me. I was born in Tainan County. My name is Yi-jin Wang. There’re five members in my family. My grandmother is 90 years old, but she still let other people feel that she is very healthy. My father is working in Taichung; he is so busy that I don’t meet him until yesterday. My mother is a cashier of the 台糖, it has to be careful. My younger brother studies six-grades in the elementary school.
On the holidays, I like to listen to music and go to the library read the new books. Sometimes, I can stay at the library all day. I like to read books about natural. Even I will find the fashionable objects on the books. It’s very interesting. I also love to play basketball with my brother. We always have a good time when we super sweat.
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"I like to listen to music and go to the library read the new books." between "library" and "read" should add "to".
I like to play basketball, too.
maybe next we can have a game.
*I can stay at the library all day.* should change to * I can stay at the library all the day.*
" Sometimes, I can stay at the library all day." change into " Sometime I can stay at the library all day."
1190?! I think you typed wrong, or
you are 817 years old now!!
Wow, your grandmother is longevous.
I think she is very healthy!!
"I like to read books about natural." I think "I like to read some(or the) books about natural." is better.
Play basketball can let your become healthy and can help you relax.
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