I love my bedroom, because it is filled with my memories.
When you walk into my bedroom, there is a big rug in the middle of the room. The dresser is on the right and next to the bed.
The window is on the back wall, it always has sunshine.
And there is a cute clock over the window. The green cabinet is on the left. The desk is in the left corner, on the desk, it usually has a large of things on it. The computer is next to the desk.
I like my bedroom, because of there is a lot of things about me.
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How a wonderful room you have!
It must be very joyful to live in the room.
"I love my bedroom, because it is filled with my memories." "I like my bedroom, because of there is a lot of things about me." I think the ","can be erased.
*The desk is in the left corner, on the desk,*
you should change to *The desk is on the left corner,*.
Very good your bedroom must be very sweet.
"because it is filled with my memories" should change into " because it is full of my memories" or "because it filled with my memories".
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You bedroom is pretty wonderful. You must cherish it very much.
Good!
I think your bedroom is warm
because it always has sunshine.
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