Tom and Lisa are brother and sister. Several weeks ago, their mother got sick and sent to the hospital. They found a tumor in their mother’s guts. Tom and Lisa were very nervous and afeard about that. They can not sleep or eat very well, because of their mother.
Their mother was checking and checking. They were waiting for a report. After inspecting, they found the guts were a benign tumor. The surgeon operated on her to remove the tumor. Lisa was in the hospital after her mother operating. Now it is a very successful operate. Lisa calls her brother and tells him this good news. Eventually, they are weeping for joy.
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"They can not sleep or eat very well, because of their mother." I think that "Because of their mother, they can not sleep or eat very well." is better.
"The surgeon operated on her to remove the tumor."
The "surgeon" can add a "s" behind it. Because it's not possible there are only a surgeon to operate.
*Lisa was in the hospital after her mother operating. *
should change to *Lisa was in the hospital after her mother was operating. *
Congratulation on Tom and Lisa's mother. To be healthy is the most important thing in our life.
After the a frustration, their sensibilities will be more strengthen
"their mother got sick and sent to the hospital."
you could plus "was"
"their mother got sick and was sent to the hospital."
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