Hello , I'm Jin. I was born in Tainan county. I'm a senior high school student.
When I have free time, I like to go out with my family. We are always having a goodtime. My family like to enjoy with the natural world.
Now, I am studying English and I want to get high pay on my work. Because
of this reason I have to learn more and more. After I graduating I hope to have
a great college.
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*I hope to have a great college.*
This sentence I think you should change
*I hope to study in a great college.*
I hope that you can enter a good college
"We are always having a goodtime."
I think "We always have a goodtime." is better.
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